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PostSubject: 24 Bars comments   Sat Feb 03, 2007 2:00 pm

You know what it is. I thought this up in Science class, tell me you think
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PostSubject: Re: 24 Bars comments   Sat Feb 03, 2007 5:31 pm

All good... Well Except the last line that was Good...
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PostSubject: Re: 24 Bars comments   Sat Feb 03, 2007 5:38 pm

Yeah I ain't like that line either I put in at the spur of the moment to it an even 24 I might replace it.
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PostSubject: Re: 24 Bars comments   Mon Feb 05, 2007 2:44 pm

Saying that it was completely awesome would be an understatement!!!

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PostSubject: Re: 24 Bars comments   Fri Mar 16, 2007 4:48 pm

Your wordplay is mad hot! 24 bars is awesome.
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