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PostSubject: Team Beta comments   Thu Feb 01, 2007 11:42 pm

Yeah I'm Mega Cartman, so tell me how my 2005 epic is. I knpw the dialogue suck so don't tell me.
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PostSubject: Re: Team Beta comments   Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:39 am

I read Chapter one and I have to Say, Wow... Great Descriptive, Some of which I had to Read Twice so my Brain could make sense of it. Great Idea and excellent Description, I can't comment on Plot as I've only read First Chapter. Go You
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PostSubject: Re: Team Beta comments   Fri Feb 02, 2007 2:39 pm

Thanks, I posted all the chapters up. But you should read alittle more, it gets better as it continues, The plot is basically they're suppose to reflect what the government would do if could control super heros.
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PostSubject: Re: Team Beta comments   Fri Feb 02, 2007 3:10 pm

I only read the first chapter, but I liked it. Usually I wouldn't be into this kind of thing, but I think that I could get into Team Beta.

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PostSubject: Re: Team Beta comments   Fri Feb 02, 2007 3:21 pm

Thanks I posted about 9 chapters there won' t than that either...
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PostSubject: Re: Team Beta comments   Fri Feb 02, 2007 6:10 pm

Don't post anymore just yet, Otherwise I won't beable to keep up .
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PostSubject: Re: Team Beta comments   Sat Feb 03, 2007 1:29 pm

I only read 2 chapters, but that was enough to get me interested.

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