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PostSubject: Short Hook   Mon Jan 29, 2007 8:22 pm

It's in song/poem section. Tell me what you think.
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PostSubject: Re: Short Hook   Tue Jan 30, 2007 11:37 am

I think it's quite creative.

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PostSubject: Re: Short Hook   Tue Jan 30, 2007 1:46 pm

Yeah, I agree. The only poems I'm good at are Haikus and Limericks because we Spent a long time doing them in school a couple of years ago .
Eventhough it's not so much of a poem it's more of a Short Rap...
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PostSubject: Re: Short Hook   Tue Jan 30, 2007 10:40 pm

I like it, It has a lot of emotion in it.

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PostSubject: Re: Short Hook   Wed Jan 31, 2007 5:35 pm

It's suppose to be a short rap I might add a second verse. Thanks for the support it was shorter than this but I got more inspiration while writing it.
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