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PostSubject: Be cautious comments   Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:32 am

Drop some advice. Peace.
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PostSubject: Re: Be cautious comments   Sat Mar 17, 2007 2:41 am

I wont front it was really good your hook was good also. Among my favorite lines are "When you see niggas roll 30 deep on streets/
Like England in Iraq you better learn to retreat"

That so true though I liked you r 34 bars better this one was good to

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PostSubject: Re: Be cautious comments   Sat Mar 17, 2007 10:03 am

Thanks yo, one of my biggest fans. And the England comment ... I`m trying to encorporate punchlines more
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PostSubject: Re: Be cautious comments   Sat Mar 17, 2007 11:14 am

Thats cool, looking forward to more of your works.
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